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Post by yoshiesdomain on Aug 13, 2009 6:31:44 GMT -5
I write alot of lyrics that may or may not end up in songs of mine. This particular one is about the rapture and how if we worry too much about tomorrow, we will miss today. It's okayish... not one of my best.
Never again will we fly away, To see another day, That's all I have to say The life that you repay
You cut my wings in half, I gave you all I had, But thats never enough It's never enough
Into a world unknown, I'll climb the lonely rope, And I'll be your only hope, You never once stood by me,
Never again will we fly away, Salvation's too far away, Is there another way? Because this isn't enough
Fall before me in this life, Walk away, I'm by your side, We can be another time, But for now, we all fall down
You fear a man who cried And love god who died For the life thats mine, And you see that we all fall down All fall down
I dont care what you say, Will you ever repay, The sins of today, When yesterday still lingers.
Do you know what to do, 'Cause I am coming for you, And I've got nothing lose, And everything to gain,
I'll never do it again, The raptures coming again, And we'll never know when Because we'll fall to pieces
Another day in the life, Without you by my side, When I have never lied, Is it ever enough?
Fall before me in this life, Walk away, I'm by your side, We can be another time, But for now, we all fall down
You fear a man who cried And love god who died For the life thats mine, And you see that we all fall down We all fall down
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Post by uksix on Aug 13, 2009 13:46:53 GMT -5
I like these lyrics, the chorous is also good, and it all fits together as some songs randamly dosnt go together.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Aug 13, 2009 16:04:45 GMT -5
Sounds great Cane, nice job some of the words go well it would be good to hear as a real song haha.
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Post by shaun on Aug 15, 2009 5:41:02 GMT -5
Heres a verse reccomendation: Ring-a-Ring o'Rosies A Pocket full of Posies "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!" We all fall Down! In all seriousness, tis decent. I don't get what the concept means by falling down. But it's still better than lyrics i wrote .
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Aug 15, 2009 22:03:42 GMT -5
Well, the 'All Fall Down' notion is a metaphor. The song, as said is about the rapture, but in a non-religious way. We all limit ourselves in this life in hopes of making it to the next life or something to that effect, but by doing so we all fall down into our own personal hell, missing out on the life we are so lucky to have.
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Post by shaun on Aug 16, 2009 6:53:55 GMT -5
Oh..so your making up a hymn?
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