Keff
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Post by Keff on Jul 28, 2009 7:14:39 GMT -5
New style, I like it.
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Jul 28, 2009 7:17:38 GMT -5
Looks like a bad scan of a newspaper article. Sorry, I just don't like it alot. Don't get me wrong, its 20x better than anything I could do, but it just doesn't stand out.
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Post by shaun on Jul 28, 2009 7:25:01 GMT -5
Asss i said on PP: Focal looks quite distorted, either that or my vision is blurred. I like the colour effects with the desaturation and bright red. Loving the BG, and effects around Torres nice job.
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Post by CMC on Jul 28, 2009 7:56:29 GMT -5
Torres!!!! I love it simply for that.
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 28, 2009 18:45:52 GMT -5
Well, I like the background. I'm not fond of is the black and white levels on Torres. The head has a darker shade of gray, but the body has a lighter shade of gray. Like Josh said, it does kinda look like a bad newspaper print, therefore I don't like the effect on the guy. I'm not sure what the splatter thing is behind him, but it just looks messy. I'd complete redo the main picture and the splatter thing behind him. I think it would look better if you took the original picture, desaturated and just messed with the contrast. Then, I'd mess around with whatever that effect is behind him,and make it look less messy. Just my opinion. If you like it, don't bother it.
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Keff
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Post by Keff on Jul 30, 2009 5:40:35 GMT -5
The funny thing is, there is no splatter at all, its apart of the stock (the crowd in the background). Also, when I was doing this in colour i desaturated it then coloured the shirt in so by the time I finished the sig it had turned out lighter when it was all desaturated so the head looks off.. Also I see your points about the newspaper thing, but thats just the style I was going for and if you don't like it thats fair enough.
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 30, 2009 5:46:18 GMT -5
Oh it's the crowd. Well I'd erase that and put some sort of different effect behind him. Or the swirling neon line thing, even though it's overrated. Make that red and make it wrap around him.
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Keff
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Post by Keff on Jul 30, 2009 5:48:00 GMT -5
I'll think about it
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