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Post by CMC on Jul 26, 2009 22:31:43 GMT -5
Don’t answer the phone, don’t open the door, don’t try to hide, but most of all, don’t scream.When a Killer terrorizes a small town, who will survive the massacre that awaits them? ____________________________________________________ A remake of the original film, with the same characters, but a whole new plot.
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Post by CMC on Jul 26, 2009 22:32:00 GMT -5
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Post by CMC on Jul 26, 2009 22:32:15 GMT -5
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 27, 2009 1:46:26 GMT -5
This is gonna be awesome. Can't wait.
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Post by CMC on Jul 27, 2009 8:55:19 GMT -5
Thanks TC, updated with some more characters.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Jul 27, 2009 15:46:19 GMT -5
This will be great! I can't wait for the chapters to be posted man.
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Post by CMC on Jul 31, 2009 19:34:23 GMT -5
Chapter 1 – Don’t answer the phone
Woodsboro, CA USA
Casey is in her house alone, making some popcorn as she gets ready to watch a horror film. She walks through the kitchen when all of a sudden the phone rings.
Casey: Hello.
Voice: Who is this?
Casey: Well if you don't know, then I think you have the wrong number, bye.
She hangs up the phone and goes to check on her popcorn. She is startled as the phone rings again.
Casey: ...Hello.
Voice: Why did you hang up?
Casey: You have the wrong number, why did you ring back?
Voice: To say sorry, what is your name?
Casey: Why do you want to know my name?
Voice: I want to know who I’m looking....talking to.
She looks scared as her finger gets near to the end call button.
Casey: I’m...going to g...
Voice: Hang up on me I’ll gut you like a fucking fish.
Casey: .....Who...are you?
Voice: I’m the guy who’s going to fucking kill you.
As soon as that is said, the closet door smashes open, the killer runs out, as Casey, tries to flee the house. She runs through the kitchen, as the popcorn catches on fire setting off the smoke alarm.
The killer is nowhere to be seen as her phone rings again.
Casey: What do you want?!
Voice: To see what your insides look like..
She hangs up the phone and before she has time to move, is stabbed in the back. As Casey drops to the floor, she rolls over and is looking up at the masked killer.
She reaches up and touches the mask with her fingertips before the killer raises his hand and drives the knife into her heart over and over.
The popcorn continues to burn as the killer escapes the house through the back door, as this happens, Casey Becker’s parents arrive at the house. They walk through the door to find Casey mutilated on the floor, her mother screams to end the scene. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Post by Gavska on Jul 31, 2009 20:05:06 GMT -5
Remarkably similar to first one so I guess I'll just have to wait to see how it develops. Still sounding good though.
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Post by CMC on Aug 3, 2009 19:53:16 GMT -5
Chapter 2 – PG-13?
Woodsboro, CA USA
Randy Meeks is filling up the movies at the movie rental store, as he is talking to Stu Macher. The store has just closed.
Stu: Just got off the phone with Billy, he’s now coming, he told me about Casey. You hear about it yet?, she got gutted dude, horror movie style.
Randy: Horror movie style? That’s a very mediocre horror film, she got stabbed, that’s at least, what? PG-13? Where’s the origina.....
He is interrupted by a loud crash in the backroom.
Randy: Hang on Stu, probably Steve screwing around again.
He goes into the backroom to find out what the crash was and everything goes silent. It stays this way for a few mintues before a scream is let out.
Stu: ...Randy?
He screams more before it goes silent. Stu runs in to see Randy left bloodied on the floor.
He backs out in shock before he is confronted by the killer. Stu is chased throughout the movie store, running between isles, and knocking down films as they go.
They carry on until the wall prevents them from running further, Stu tries to fight him off, throwing punches, but the killer shakes them off, he ducks Stu’s final chance at a shot, and stabs him in the stomach.
Stu: ....Who....Who are you?
The killer raises his arm, and thrusts it down into the chest of Stu. He continues to do this six times until Stu’s eyes slowly shut.
The killer sneaks through the back room as Billy gets to the door. He forces it open. Billy walks in to see the mess in the store.
Billy: Stu? Randy? You here?
He sees Stu propped up against the wall in the corner and rushes to find him covered in blood. He checks his pulse to find that there is none, and realises Stu has suffered the same fate that Casey did, before he gets up and sprints out of the door. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Post by Gavska on Aug 3, 2009 22:17:13 GMT -5
Quite a good scene. Seems a little short for two murders but in the grand scheme it fits. It's not like this is a script or anything. Gets the point across very well.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Aug 4, 2009 7:27:33 GMT -5
Nice job man, love this so far, I can't wait for the next chapters.
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