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Post by shaun on Jul 16, 2009 9:52:01 GMT -5
i26.tinypic.com/11t3c4y.pngDid all i could be bothered too, tats are off and pads and wrist bands missing i know, but i have no willpower left in the tank. Before anyone says, the eagle eye styled tat thing going down his ab's wasn't the one i was maing for that reason
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 16, 2009 14:44:00 GMT -5
Like I said on MSN, you got lazy with it and that's always your downfall. The pants are way too high and look funny. The body parts with tats are copied and pasted. He has no gloves/pads/wrist bands. I thought this was gonna be a really good micro after I saw the first preview. This could be loads better, and you have the potential to do it. SO DO IT BITCH!
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Post by shaun on Jul 16, 2009 15:35:55 GMT -5
I know he has no gloves wristbands etc i mentioned it up there, but i have no will to make micros these days at all =/ I just wanted to get one done for once..
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dave
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Made by my friend Alex(not forum alexS)[Xb0:falconlair]
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Post by dave on Jul 21, 2009 1:06:14 GMT -5
i think it look good it seem like the mask is a little funny and the pants are to high
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Post by shaun on Jul 22, 2009 14:17:43 GMT -5
Its funny, what?
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Jul 23, 2009 0:33:26 GMT -5
Eh. Could have been great and led you to being drafted, but you got lazy. Flipped tattoos, didnt fix the parts I tried to help with, lack of gloves, pants are too high and lack of designs... could have been an awesome micro, but now its plain and boring.
Fix this up and make the colours something better than a boring shade like grey. Make it red or something.
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Post by shaun on Jul 23, 2009 5:06:11 GMT -5
Haha when don't i get lazy. And im sure i couldnt have got drafted off of this if i had the same standard as the head..I think the head is terrible...
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 23, 2009 15:11:12 GMT -5
I think you're terrible!
I kid.
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Post by shaun on Jul 23, 2009 17:55:59 GMT -5
Your face is terrible.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 23, 2009 21:47:25 GMT -5
Actually its quite sexy.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Jul 24, 2009 5:40:48 GMT -5
When I first seen the preview it looks freaking awesome and then when you post it some thing spolied it, and I think it is the pants but to be fair its still an overall a great micro Shaun nice job.
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Jul 24, 2009 18:32:12 GMT -5
When I first seen the preview it looks freaking awesome and then when you post it some thing spolied it, and I think it is the pants but to be fair its still an overall a great micro Shaun nice job. I hate your replies... you say he spoiled the micro, then say its great.
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Post by shaun on Jul 24, 2009 18:48:13 GMT -5
Losing...intrest...slowly.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Jul 25, 2009 6:19:39 GMT -5
ahh well never mind. Ok I took this micro and took a look in paint I think its time for me to try and help out this part of the forum. I have given you some points that you should work on it can make the micro look abit better this is just a quick one but, I hope you know what I am going on about and what knot. that should help you need to work on the AA Lines and also work on some parts of the shading just above the pants and also around near the tatoos. You should also work on your shading around the pants becuase imo it looks like the way SPZ shades and i would take offence to it dude so take your time and work on that abit more.
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Post by shaun on Jul 25, 2009 12:22:51 GMT -5
Did you add something to the eagle heads near the forehead cuz it looks bad now .
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