dave
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Made by my friend Alex(not forum alexS)[Xb0:falconlair]
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Post by dave on Jul 31, 2009 1:54:08 GMT -5
this i am very proud of i think it came out the best this it took awile to do
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Spz
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Post by Spz on Jul 31, 2009 1:56:57 GMT -5
hes to skinny he need to be more musclular, face is a little off
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Post by likcmianus on Jul 31, 2009 2:03:01 GMT -5
As SPZ said, he's far too thin. The face doesn't show much resemblance. I don't really like the logo on the shirt or hat either, can't even tell what they are. You're better than this.
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Jul 31, 2009 5:17:05 GMT -5
As already said, far too skinny and the template is boring and generic. Head doesn't look much like him. Try to look further into the photos and copy the shapes of everything right. His head is a different shape and alot different, as is his body (should be much more muscular). I like the logos and pants, though the outside line of the pants needs more bulk, rather than just following the leg line. Not a bad micro, by any means, but its not fantastic. Decent work.
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dave
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Made by my friend Alex(not forum alexS)[Xb0:falconlair]
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Post by dave on Aug 6, 2009 3:39:31 GMT -5
okay i guess this one going in the crapper lol will see what i can do with this to make it better
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Aug 6, 2009 6:09:54 GMT -5
Looks Ok Dave, needs work in some pleaces, arms, AA lines and also like most people have said he is too skinny needs to be a tab bit fatter so i helped my self to take alook and see what I could do just so you get the Idea, I have not worked on the face becuase I don't have the time right now but I have worked on the torso and abs and stuff... Top = Yours Bottom = Mine If you put this in to paint and zoom in you can see what I have done, 1. 2 Shades 2. 3 Shades 3. 4 ShadesYou can tell the diffrence, loads maybe you can work on that too becuase it might help you make your micros alot better, becuase it helped me and I was like you or maybe worse.
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dave
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Made by my friend Alex(not forum alexS)[Xb0:falconlair]
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Post by dave on Aug 6, 2009 19:14:33 GMT -5
thx wayne you didnt have to do that
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Aug 7, 2009 6:50:20 GMT -5
It is ok, I just want to help some of not so good microers like you, SPZ, Shaun and others that i can't be arsed to list haha.
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Post by shaun on Aug 8, 2009 18:38:55 GMT -5
I cant see one different thing in your edit..other than the definition of the abdomen, way to fail. Also why'd you add a shadow to the outside of the abs? Before you go on a roid rage I'm only kidding.
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Post by yoshiesdomain on Aug 8, 2009 20:40:30 GMT -5
It is ok, I just want to help some of not so good microers like you, SPZ, Shaun and others that i can't be arsed to list haha. ..... That's not very nice.
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Post by shaun on Aug 9, 2009 9:18:05 GMT -5
He forget to include himself on the list, so his help is worthless =D
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Post by CMC on Aug 9, 2009 11:15:36 GMT -5
It is ok, I just want to help some of not so good microers like you, SPZ, Shaun and others that i can't be arsed to list haha. Bit harsh, and Shauns progressed a lot over the time, if he wasn't lazy (no offence) he could be drafted very soon.
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Post by Breaking Waynejamin™ on Aug 9, 2009 15:18:39 GMT -5
He forget to include himself on the list, so his help is worthless =D well duh, why would i be stupid and put my own name on? yes, just so i don't seem stupid.
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Post by shaun on Aug 9, 2009 18:01:18 GMT -5
I was only yanking your chain homes. Also lolz @ CMC.
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Post by King of Kings on Aug 11, 2009 3:00:31 GMT -5
I'll be honest, I didn't even realize Shaun was still on the Intermediate board.
Dave, I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said about your micros.
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